Professional manuscript critique

Know exactly what your manuscript needs before you write another word.

Detailed structural and line-level feedback from a senior Big-5 editor — delivered in 7-14 business days. No generalities. No platitudes. Actionable notes on every major issue, with a clear revision plan to follow.

  • Delivered by a senior editor with Big-5 publishing experience
  • Structural + line-level feedback in a single detailed report
  • 7-14 business day turnaround — prioritised slots available
  • 100% confidential — NDA available on request
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A critique isn’t a proofreading pass. It’s a diagnostic.

Most authors send a manuscript to beta readers and get polite feedback. A professional critique tells you what’s actually broken — and how to fix it before you invest another month revising in the wrong direction.

What beta readers give you

  • “Great story!” with no actionable direction
  • Vague reactions like “I didn’t connect with the character”
  • No structural analysis — just surface-level impressions
  • No chapter-by-chapter breakdown of what’s working and what isn’t
  • No prioritised revision plan → you revise everything and fix nothing
  • Personal taste mistaken for professional publishing standards

What our critique delivers

  • Chapter-by-chapter structural analysis flagged by severity
  • Specific line-level notes with rewrite suggestions, not just flags
  • Voice, POV, and consistency audit across the full manuscript
  • Pacing and tension map — slow patches identified, scene by scene
  • Market & genre positioning — comp titles, reader expectations, agent appeal
  • Prioritised revision action plan — what to fix first, second, and last
2,400+ Manuscripts critiqued
94% Authors revise & publish after critique
7-14 Business day turnaround
4.9 Average author rating

What every critique report covers.

Every critique goes deep across nine dimensions. Here’s exactly what lands in your inbox.

Structural analysis

Act structure, plot logic, chapter pacing, and overall story arc — assessed against the conventions of your genre and publishing market.

Character assessment

Motivation, voice differentiation, consistency across chapters, and arc completion — every major character evaluated individually.

POV & voice audit

Point of view consistency, narrative distance, authorial intrusion, and head-hopping flagged with specific page references and suggested fixes.

Pacing & tension map

Scene-by-scene energy tracking across the full manuscript — dead zones identified, tension peaks validated, and sagging middles precisely located.

Dialogue evaluation

Subtext, character differentiation, on-the-nose detection, and exposition buried in dialogue — every major dialogue weakness flagged with examples.

Opening & closing strength

Your first 10 pages and final chapter receive deep-dive treatment — the two zones agents and readers judge most harshly and most immediately.

Market & genre fit

How your manuscript compares to current comp titles, where it sits in the market, and what adjustments would make it more competitive for agents or self-publishing.

Line-level samples

Annotated excerpts drawn from multiple chapters — showing exactly how specific issues manifest on the page, with suggested rewrites to illustrate the fix.

Revision action plan

A prioritised punch list of what to tackle first, what to fix next, and what to address last — so you leave with a clear, ordered revision roadmap, not a pile of notes.

From submission to revision plan in 14 days.

A transparent, five-step process. You always know where your manuscript is and when your report arrives.

01

Submit

Upload your manuscript and complete a brief intake form — genre, word count, target audience, and one specific concern you want the editor to prioritise.

02

Editor Match

We assign a senior editor with Big-5 experience in your exact genre. No generalists — only editors who have worked in your category professionally.

03

Deep Read

Your editor reads the full manuscript twice — once for story and overall arc, once for craft and line-level execution. No skimming, no shortcuts.

04

Critique Report

A detailed written report delivered to your inbox — structural notes, line-level samples, market analysis, and a prioritised revision action plan.

05

Debrief Call

A 45-min live call with your editor to walk through the report, answer questions, and clarify the revision priority list. Included in Full and Premium packages.

Editor credentials
Editor credentials

Every critique is delivered by an editor with Big-5 publishing experience.

Our editors have worked at Penguin Random House, HarperCollins, Simon & Schuster, and leading literary agencies. They know what agents flag on page one, what acquisition editors look for in the first chapter, and what kills a submission before it reaches a second read.

  • Average 15+ years of editorial experience per editor
  • Genre-matched across fiction, nonfiction, memoir, children’s, and screenplay
  • Former Big-5 acquisition editors and senior developmental editors
  • Every report reviewed by a second editor before delivery
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Our Critique Packages

Structural Critique

For manuscripts that need a big-picture diagnosis before diving into line-level revision.

$699 one-time, all-inclusive
  • Full manuscript read (up to 80k words)
  • Chapter-by-chapter structural notes
  • Pacing and tension analysis
  • Market & genre positioning
  • Revision priority list
  • Written report delivered in 10-14 days
Most Popular
Full Critique

Structural + line-level feedback and a live debrief call — the complete editorial picture.

$1,199 one-time, all-inclusive
  • Everything in Structural Critique
  • Line-level annotations (first 50 pages)
  • Character arc & voice audit
  • Dialogue assessment
  • Opening & closing chapter deep-dive
  • 45-min debrief call with your editor
  • Delivered in 7-10 days
Premium + Coaching

Full critique with whole-manuscript line notes, coaching sessions, and revision support.

$2,499 starting from
  • Everything in Full Critique
  • Line-level annotations (full manuscript)
  • 3 × 60-min coaching sessions
  • One revision pass reviewed (up to 30k words)
  • Query letter review
  • Agent submission strategy
  • Priority 7-day turnaround

What you’re guaranteed when you submit.

We stand behind every critique report we deliver. These aren’t aspirations — they’re commitments.

Actionable Feedback

Every note comes with a suggested fix or direction — not just a flag. If we identify a problem, we show you how to solve it.

Genre-Matched Editor

Your manuscript goes to an editor with published credits and professional experience in your exact genre. Never a generalist.

On-Time Delivery

Report delivered by the agreed date or your next service is free. We commit to a deadline before we accept your manuscript.

Full Confidentiality

NDA available on request. Your manuscript, characters, and story ideas never leave our secure system and are never shared.

No Platitudes

If we can’t give you specific, useful feedback, we’ll tell you why and refund the difference. Honest critiques only — always.

Debrief Included

Every Full and Premium critique includes a live 45-min call with your editor — to walk through the report and answer every question.

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Jan 2026
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Frequently Asked Questions

Straight answers to the questions authors ask most about this service.

A manuscript critique is a comprehensive editorial assessment of your complete or near-complete manuscript. It covers story structure or argument flow, pacing, character or voice consistency, chapter organisation, reader engagement, market positioning, and a plain-language summary of what needs to change before the book is ready to publish or query.

Yes. A critique assesses and reports — it tells you what needs to change and why. Editing makes those changes directly in the manuscript. Most authors benefit from a critique first, particularly if structural work is needed, as it is more efficient to assess before line-editing.

For a standard manuscript (60,000–80,000 words), a full critique is typically delivered within 10–14 business days. The report runs 2,000–4,000 words and is accompanied by in-manuscript margin notes.

You receive a detailed editorial report covering macro-level issues (structure, arc, pacing), chapter-by-chapter notes, a summary of recurring micro-level issues (word choice, repetition, dialogue), and a prioritised action list for revision.

Yes. Every critique is assigned to an editor with demonstrated experience in your genre — we do not send a literary fiction specialist to assess a business book. Genre familiarity is required because market expectations, pacing norms, and structural conventions differ significantly.

Absolutely. Readers and reviewers are as demanding as agents. A critique identifies the issues that would generate negative reviews or reader drop-off before they become public. It is one of the highest-return investments in the publishing process.

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